Unnatural

If your copy doesn’t sound human, it won’t feel real, and it won't build trust — it'll build distance.

Good for

Making your copy sound more human, relatable, and conversational


What it means

If your copy sounds like a robot, a tech manual, or a boardroom presentation - readers will tune out fast.

Unnatural copy is usually full of:

Jargon – Overcomplicated or industry-heavy terms

Buzzwords – Vague, trendy language that means nothing

Sales Speak – Overhyped claims without personality or connection

Real people don’t speak in bullet points and buzzwords. Neither should your copy.


Example Use Case

Homepage copy for a time-tracking tool


Example Implementation

Unnatural version:“Optimize workflow efficiency through integrated productivity solutions.”
Natural version:“Track your time. Hit your goals. Get home earlier.”